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Offline CHEESE4ALL

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« on: November 24, 2012, 05:43:46 PM »
With my new found ability to post pictures, I've decided to ask for your opinions on this drawing.  Of course, because you haven't seen the picture I drew, you won't see the obvious problems that decide whether or not it looks like who it's supposed to be. Normally I'm good at judging that in pictures, but this one's a little more difficult for me. 

   Anyways, I'm looking for things to improve (shading, hair, eyes, ect.)  I am NOT looking for complements, but constructive criticism.  I will not be offended by anything you say, even if you say it's the ugliest thing you've every laid eyes on. As long as it's the truth.


And I invite others to post their art on this thread as well  :smile:
« Last Edit: November 25, 2012, 07:03:53 AM by CHEESE4ALL »
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« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 06:55:25 PM »
O_O nice!

im not really in the art but i can try to find some good pictures on the web?


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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2012, 06:26:55 AM »
It's better than anything I could do. The only thing I could suggest is make the lenses shine a small bit.

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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2012, 06:31:16 AM »
Ooh, there's a good idea.    Is the picture chopped up a bit, or is my phone just messing with me?
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« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2012, 06:33:12 AM »
It's the image. It's doing it here too.

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« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2012, 06:41:18 AM »
Yeah I was wondering why it was doing that.

Anyway, very nice job ^_^ I know you're not looking for compliments, but I don't draw or look at art enough to comment lol.

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« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2012, 06:44:02 AM »
Huh.  Any ideas how i could fix it?   I had a different picture this morning and it wasn't doing (same drawing, different picture)    I'm thinking trying a different pic.

And thank-you :smile:
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« Reply #7 on: November 25, 2012, 06:44:40 AM »
Perhaps the image is too big?

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« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2012, 06:49:21 AM »
Okay, did I fix it?
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« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2012, 06:50:07 AM »
Yes

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« Reply #10 on: November 25, 2012, 07:07:10 AM »
I had to change some of it. The glasses weren't the right shape and my eyes weren't right either.  If I mess with the eyes anymore, though, the paper will be gone and there will just be two holes :(
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« Reply #11 on: November 25, 2012, 07:08:41 AM »
Looks fine to me, but I guess I'm in the same situation as Star.

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« Reply #12 on: November 25, 2012, 07:36:21 AM »
I suppose it would help if I posted the actual  picture, but I'm kind of unwilling to do that. 


         Oh and if you're wondering why the pupils are so dilated, it's 'cause it was dark when I took it.
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« Reply #13 on: November 25, 2012, 12:19:40 PM »
Oooh I got something for ya, Cheese. Try drawing right-side up XD

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« Reply #14 on: November 25, 2012, 12:21:04 PM »
If you find working upside-down more comfortable, I have some light arrows ready :D (Stone Tower reference)