Topic: A Story I'm Making  (Read 1296 times)

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Offline Halcyonic Legend

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« on: December 11, 2012, 10:13:28 AM »
Well, I hope to continue a story I tried to create, but I haven't really haven't had time to do it.
When I eventually put it up, will you guys give me some input? You know, just tell me if I'm missing anything canon, if I have a plot hole, if something doesn't make sense.

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« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2012, 10:57:52 AM »
Eh? How did I miss this thread o.O?

Yes, by all means, I'd love to read it :3

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« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2012, 12:56:13 PM »
where? i want to read it to :D


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« Reply #3 on: December 19, 2012, 01:36:15 PM »
Legend? Are you there? Legend? LEGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEND!

The suspense is killing me. ಠ~ಠ What's it about? Huh? Huh? Huh??!?1

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« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2012, 04:32:34 AM »
Sorry, I was busy this week what with finals and moving back home and holidays and such.  But I'm going to make it a story based around two characters, named Jorge and Serena, who are brother and sister. It's going be be somewhat of an origin story for Jorge if you guys have read Nyrans Gaia Falls.

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« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2012, 04:38:13 AM »
Hex yeah, I would love to see it.

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« Reply #6 on: December 22, 2012, 05:30:38 AM »
wow. way to copy my style. just kidding. I am using or trying to use all of those characters in my book. so far i have locked in lux, sakura, and xion. Hunter I may use as Umbra's houser.

Anyaw want to see it. sounds like a good story.
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« Reply #7 on: December 22, 2012, 05:33:39 AM »
Do you have a story somewhere, Axel? Give me a link.

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« Reply #8 on: December 22, 2012, 05:40:09 AM »
No. Still trying to get the idea.
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« Reply #9 on: December 26, 2012, 06:18:40 PM »
Gotcha.